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^^thats my vote in case you dont know...Fairinheight your structure was off and i dont like the way you section off your shit like that..seems to me that, that style just degrades the reader and makes me not wanna read or give a damn about ur punches
..now carson..it was an ok verse..i've seen you do better...much better..still you won.

v/Carson

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