Sharp Perfection.
From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin |
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Imagery is real, and reality is violence, violence prays on idle hands
^ i found this line to speak truth. which is kinda scary when you think about it really.
i liked the flow of this piece, i thought it was smack on, and sounded good when read out loud. i like how you went into great detail to describe some things that can be put very simple, like ppl who dont think for themselves, that follow everyone else. this piece is a piece that can be taken many different ways, and i feel covers a wide variety of problems in and with society. it was a nice read yet again.
~Tera~
DONT HATE
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R.I.P to my lost girl
~ Nyla ~
keep singing in heaven
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