don't give yourself credit son this shit was garbage beyond belief i hope to god that you didn't consider this to hold any creds any where but anyways you need to strengthen your flow vocab and while you're at it kick out a few more methaphors, look just don't go braggin before you get ripped so type quikly

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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun