my vote goes to wordplay.....it was a nice easy read....flowed well with some nice multi's, the punche's were there but coulda hit a bit harder....pretty good considering you went first
Xceltiz-His Best Rhymes Is Proberly.. Paradice
.................................................. ...^Damn He's The Wack LL Cool J<-------what's this i got a little confused...i dont know why you did that but i dont see the relivancy.
your super punchline is in need of a rewrite...wasn't feelin it at all....keep workin at it!