PLAY...... a Kanye West type of beat with the female vocals... first guy... rhymes are quite simple.. a pretty good flow... delivery is ok.... emotion needs work... just sounds kinda boring... like the hook... 2nd guy sounds like southstar. your adlibbs are fucked. a pretty good track though..... oh and if ur lookin' for recognition on RB then just leave.... ppl are all about text on RB.... go to RM.... rapmusic if u want good feedback