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Old 02-06-04, 04:32 PM   #23
SMZ
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Every 2 lines rhyme... Then it changes to the next rhyme... Every 2 lines... Unlike your verse which changed every 20 or so lines...

The reason I kept hitting one rhyme so often is because that takes more skill. It's much harder to find 16 words that rhyme and still say what you want than it is if you keep switching every two.
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