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Old 02-06-04, 05:20 PM   #11
VanIllabymidnite
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Here's how it is.

Flow=D, he had a better flow to his piece which made it an easier read and more enjoyable. WTF, you should work on your flow a bit, it was a little messed up.

Punches=D, his punches were over all harder. WTF, you should work on punching straight at someone, it seemed like you had a lot of filler in your piece.

Personals=WTF, I have to give this one to WTF just because I didn't really see any personals from D, and only one from WTF so it has to go to WTF. You should both work on developing personals, good personals are a very good tool.

Vocab=D, he had a better range of vocab in his drop, WTF, you should work on your vocab, it can help win a battle.

Over all=D, you had an okay drop here, you had some good punches and a good flow, but you need to work on personals and some on your vocab, it was better in this battle but it could be improved, keep at it and you'll keep getting better.
WTF, you had one good personal in this battle, but you need to work on your punches, your vocab, and your flow, it will really help you get better if you do some work on improving those areas, other than that just keep at it.

Vote=D
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