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IP:
self... ^werd... Penskills... ^werd...
Pitch Black...
Things you did right...
Erm... Im proud of you... You managed to spell the word scooter... And you seem to be proud aswell... By the way you put the word in capitals... Well Done...
Moving on...
Things you did wrong...
Used the word 'boobies' {spelt wrong in your verse <-- That is the correct spelling}
How to improve...
Take out the numbers...
Put it into proper lines...
Make it rhyme...
Get a flow...
Keep trying...
Pz...
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