Not good on either part...

Jeagutta, wow your just damn confusing, your punches were non-existant and half of your vocab is way out of context....had u of chilled wit the multi's focused on the punches an shortened your structure u mighta won this one....but wait...I jus said to change your whole verse....

Thing, You came very wak here, basic, nothing special.....You punches were there but blah....One thing u had goin for u was structure....this helped your personals and flo....By far less of what I had expected, but alot better than Jeagutta

vote- thing