Remember me?
You claimed i did not understand one of ur previous pieces.
Yet i am in the crew you just joined..
As leader..co-leader..or w/e but leader none the less.
Anyways...on with this piece then.

Short..comes first to mind..
& somehow this gave me a poetic feel..for some reason.
Not because of the flow or structure but..
I guess i can't really explain it, but let me tell you..it isnt a bad thing.
All i can say is..that i liked it.
Good array of words..good frame & flow.. so basically..good.
Though it has to be said..Longer please.