decent drop, everything but the flow was on point, if not exceptional, but I do have to remark about your flow. It seemed to me, that about every once in a while, you would lose the flow, mostly due to bad transitions. But other then that, Wordplay=nice, meta's=nice, multis=decent, originality=decent, effort=decent, it just seemed like you didn't put to much into it. But don't get me wrong, it was a good piece, 7.5/10

If you could return the favor, and give an honest critique on my piece, in my sig, I would appreciate it.