Breakdown:
Mario
Punches: 5/10 (okay punches not much that hit hard)
flow:4/10 (wasn't feelin' your flow too much, work on it)
Multies:2/10 (there were none in this battle, and default score for me is 2)
Metas:3/10 (you didn't really have any metas either, you should try to incorperate those in your future verses)
Personals:3/10 (Diss the person, don't just say stuff that you could put in a battle against me)
Structure: 4/10 (the structure was off,work on that)
Total: 21
Pnemonia boy
Punches: 6/10 ( pretty nice punches, nothin' too amazing)
Flow: 6/10 (you got a pretty nice flow and i was feelin' it kinda)
Metas: 5/10 (well you didn't use many, but you used enough to score you a 5)
Multies: 2/10 (once again default score is 2)
Personals: 3/10 ( you also needed to incorperate some personals so it brings more to the punches)
Structure:6/10 (you had a pretty nice structure)
Total:28/60
Numbers don't lie, pretty weak battle overall, but pnemonia boy's finisher was tight, but you weren't consistant with 'em so one punch couldn't sway the whole category, the punches were taken by pnemonia boy and just was about everything else, Mario work on your punches, structure definately and your multies and metas...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112201 You guys know what to do...
(this vote shouldn't get DQ'd)