Ok. . .

OutCome - I Wasn't Feeling Your Verse At All, Too Many Played Lines, Bold Was Annoying. . Only Good Punch That Actually Hit Were The Two Hemisphere Lines, Flow Was OK, Structure Was Fine, Vocab Was Pretty Good IN The First Couple Of Lines But THen You Went Downhill. . Opener Sucked Bad Ones, Wack Masterubation Line Is Played As Fucking Fuck. . Closer Was Bad Too. . Gaaah, Played. . Your Verse Seemed Like A Park For Kids. . I Know You Got Better. . You Had Better Personals Than Dev. . You Win One Catergory. . Woot.

Best :

knock all hemispheres off the Y-axis so there pointing down
A I cant help but leave you x-up with your frown all fliped around
^^^ Nice. . Only Decent Punch You Had. .

Dev - More Creativity, Hella Nice Structure, Flow Was On-Point. . And Here's The Key To This Whole Better. . BETTER PUNCHES. . Permanent Leak Line Is Mad Played But Still A Bit Funny. . Your Closer Was Horrible And Played. . But That's The Only Two Complaints I Have. . Maybe Could've Included More Personals To Match OutCome's, Bu It Was Blind, So No Hate. . 2nd Line Was Nice, How You Flipped His Sig, Good Stuff. . Punches Should Win Battles, Although That's Not THe Case Here Sometimes. . Glad To See People Noticing. .

Best :

And NO your not respected… and rb’s eyes aint reading
If ya bars were breathing… it be lung cancer… ya wheezing!
^^^ Haha, Nice.

Vote - Dev.

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