This was one of the better drops that I've read. The vocab was good. Rhymes and flow were good. This pice was definately worth the read.

"Unparalleled passion, an instant loss of words
Surrender my existence if its the cost of hers"-Strong. These lines were ill as fuck

"I’ll invest the best of myself and oppress the rest abhor away
Ingest the less of myself to progress love’s crest to your array"-This shit was nice

Overall, it was a pretty strong piece. Keep up the good work.

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