Oh my fuckin god. Did you write both verses? Seems like two different people. When i read the first i was about to tell you that this piece wasnt one of your best and couldnt stand up to the last one you did. Then i read the second verse, and almost every line was quotable. Nice job. This was worth the read. Keep up the good work.

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Another thing, did you make the 1st verse weaker on purpose?
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