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Originally Posted by Archival
Oh my fuckin god. Did you write both verses? Seems like two different people. When i read the first i was about to tell you that this piece wasnt one of your best and couldnt stand up to the last one you did. Then i read the second verse, and almost every line was quotable. Nice job. This was worth the read. Keep up the good work.
Another thing, did you make the 1st verse weaker on purpose?
*waits for reply*
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