New to RB
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IP:
Tell me again, why arn't you in legends? Anyway, this was even iller than the first. You have the best imagery on the site. The wordplay in this was ill. It was an enjoyable read. Flowed great. This is a great story coming together.
I carried my dying brother on my back, to ‘shoulder the pain’-ill wordplay
Hell always looks prettier in Christmas time-ill
The grinning-jawed Negatives of deception, false god ‘erections,’
raping and desecrating the virginity of moral insurrection…-Lmao, i had to read this line a few more times. This shit was nice.
I'm actually 'blessed' to see it all, my brother in unconscious sleep
silently being mauled, while his skin begins flaking off in sheets- Dont get much better. I could just see this in my head(but in my head i see you as that person wearing a rabit suit in your avy...weird)
Anyway, this was another ill drop. Keep up the good work.
*waits on part 3*
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