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IP:
Liked this alot...
Had a nice twist to it... Nice wordplay... Good topic {obviously}... But yea... This was pretty cool... Not much vocabulary... But you made up for that with the sheer stroy tellin power of the verse...
To improve... Erm... Use more vocabulary... Erm... Dont bold it... That really is all a can think of...
Keep the standard up...
Hit up 'Front Lines Vs Open Mic'... Please... Thanks...
Pz...
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