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Old 02-06-04, 09:53 PM   #28
MythikuL
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Ok, This Fuck Tryna Play Hero For Credz. . .
No Balls, So He Has To Hold His Boy's Instead. . .
*NOT REAL IMPRESSED WITH NE THING HERE*

Before This Shit Even Started, Shoulda Known You Was Done
I Dissed, Then You Dissed, Hey. . Like Father, Like Son. . .
* AN OK ATTEMPT AT SOMETHIN COMPLEXT..NOT BAD

You Were Never Ill, So You Put It In Ya Name To Feel Special
Can't Read, You're Not Cred, Even Wacker, Lemme Help You
*AGH...STARTED OK THEN...AGH..I D K WAT HAPPENED*

I'll Attack You Dude, Just Like The Crew, I'ma Get Um. .
Ya Punches Are Pussy N Passed Over Like A Snake W/ No Venom
*NOT A BAD PUNCH LINES..NEED 2 ELEVATE MORE

Serious, I Have A Tougher Time Lightin' Ciggs In The Wind. .
Then Battlin A Tick Who Goes, Nuts. . Literally. . For His Friend. .
*GETTIN BETTER...NICE PUNCH FLOW..
You Think Big Words'll Win You Brownie Points ? . . . Please. . .
Get Ya Boy Credz N Ya Can Both Down My Joint, Then Hop Off My Nuts N Ya Knees
*NICE PUNCH*
You Insist On Gettin' Pissed, Stickin' Ya Nose Where It Don't Belong. .
Well After This Verse, This Lunatic Who Think He Dope. . .
. . . . Will Be Clowned On RB More Than A Mainstream Song. . .
*NOT A BAD LITTLE PUNCH...OVERALL OK*

OVERALL: 6/10 (NEED TO ELEVATE..PLAIN AND SIMPLE*)



Time to break down this formula, cuz he's chemically twisted
???FormulaMC??? its more like that bitch has never existed
*PUNCH AND FLOW WHERE OK..NOTHIN SPEC* (FROM U)

Look, you made the line limit, and you couldn't even follow
Thinkin you throwin packed punches? them bitches is hollow
*IVE SEEN BETTER FROM U..NOT THAT IMPRESSED*

Peep ya crew, ya'll suck and ready for an 'instant' clowning
.:K:., LM, Phsyik, Freeman..justa roster got ya'll instant downing
*PUNCH WAS LIL OFF..BUT THE CREW PERSONAL WAS TAKEN*

Its an embarassment, My name next to yours on the headline?
Kids lonely, his only conversations of life have been on a dead-line
*NICE PUNCH*
Served him in Open mic, and i kno he's seen it, just scared to reply
*Sigh* oh my, CredZ dislikes him, i feel sad for this wack lonely guy
*AGH..OK NUTTA SPECIAL

"Can't I eat just one more mc?" this hoecake must love to eat splean
Lemme just improvise quickly,He likes to eat textcee's disease clean?
*OK PUNCH..DECIENT FLOW...*
Ya nersurry rhymes are to childish to win you this battle, so step back
Ya rep's wack, battlin? why attempt that, when ya flows are that wack
*NICE FLOW...OK PUNCH*

OVERALL: 8/10

PUNCHES...ILL
FLOW..ILL
STRUCTURE...tie
VOCAB..TIE
WORDPLAY..ILL
OVERALL..ILL

ILL JUST HAD THE BETTER VERSE

GOOD JOB 2 BOTH MC'S..

AND GOOD LUCK

*HOPE THATS LONG ENOUGH 4 ALL YALL*
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