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Old 02-06-04, 11:12 PM   #1
M&rk
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flow- wtf, his flowed better jus cus he didnt have any vocab and was real short
vocab- liver, wasn't very good, but the other guy just didnt have one "wtf" u really need ta just think of less used words and go from there to rhyme wit them it'll get u on different topics and not make u look like such a newbie, and throw sum multi's in there
punches- liver, cus he didn't bite off the other doo's
originality-liver cus wtf jus fed
multis- neither, ya'll need ta put them in so your flows are better

vote- liver bothe real weak tho work on dat shit
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