BreakDown ....

Kracka T's verse



Yo In This Battle With Magic...
Im Gettin Weird Vibes Like Im Battlelin A Fagot.....
( Nice opener , your flows much better off the bat this time , personal 7.5/10 )

The Story Of This Battle Is That U Just Dont Have It..
U Just Another Victim Who Needs Practice....
( Simple effective , Good Flow 7/10 )

U Just Could Never Hack This,they Be Callin Me Krakka Cus Im White....
And The ''t'' At The End Means That Im Tight....
( Aigght , Coo , Personal Compliments to yourself , not as effective as to your opponet but you pulled it off 7/10 )

Me Rippin Ur Wack Ass Just Doesn't Feel Right....
Im Not Even Tryin To Merk Ya Whimpie Ass With All My Might....
(LOL , kinda of a corny line , weak 6/10 , but you whipped this together fast )

When I Saw Ya Style I Thought The Was Somethin Nice...
So Heres Some Advice Work On Ya Lines But Until Then Im Sayin Good Night...
( I lost you on the first line ?? ... 6/10 )

Total 33.5 /50 67%


Magic Mks Verse :

yo.
allow me to start by sayin............................................. .....................................
your lyrics are shit and you fuckin suck.
you really cant spit and you win by luck.
( Bare basics here , You fucking suck? , this aint 6th grade 5/10 )
i'm not scared whatever this faggot wants to do to me,
shoot at me
try to corner me
order me
try to kick me
lick me.
( Convoluted line here , you need to work on your structure, you might spit it tight , but we try and use the bar system here easier to follow 5.5/10 )

i am the one with the magic mic
and your the one who's mums a dyke
( Yo Man , MOM jokes are DEAD , Find something else ?? 5/10 )
and will fuckin slaughter,
your little baby daughter.
how did ya like that?
( Stupid ending , Real Weak - Supa Played 4/10 )

Total 19.5 / 40 48.8 %

Nothing Real special by both MC's , Krakka T takes the trophy ( but its a small one ) , Magic - Yo Dude I know the deadline was 30 mins and you spit quick , but some of your lines were pretty laimb , don't get discouraged , work on your flow and structure and keep elevating ....

Peace to Both and All
CrazyE

Somebody Hit this up , and I'll give you a breakdown ..... No favas Tho
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112213