my main, and only problem with this....the rhyme scheme was hard to catch (im too used to simple ones)...umm yea...this was great

the vocab was top notch, no over use and none seemed forced

it festered my soul, with no nostrum for this subdued posture
It could win me an Oscar, best performance as I smacked the floor
I never act to snore, it controls all in this unglued Opera

i didnt catch the posture/opera rhyme...probably a pronunciation difference between us

sides that this was great

if you would be so kind
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