Thread: Misunderstood
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Old 02-07-04, 02:47 AM   #2
oddly ill
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From: city of fuckville
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word of advise read your shit before you post it i'm mean spit or whatever this had no kind of flow it was more like one of those wild ass poems you here on open mic night at a jazz club, next thing is to get your vocab up this post was mad basic, you try to make it seem that you're gansta like but you said some shit in there that i wouldn't even say make your shit hot but just watch what the fuck you say and how you put it to a lyrical content. in other words just get better overall
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