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.:FreemaN:.
Fukin idiot even made an alias.. Maybe he enjoys gettin merked twice over
No skills on your behalf...
... So you'll complain in IR when this battles over
This bitch is more played than nintendo.. That really isnt a Wise Way
Just like the time you got beat...
... Not once but 2 fukin times by .:K:.
Made you put resrictions on voters.. Like you said, Youve gota be dope to vote
Fuckin stupid herb callin me out, but ya know...
... Whatever floats your boat
Id say you need to revise.. Your at school so you cant be wise
Im exposing your wackness...
... So you better start saying your goodbyes
You define the word bitch.. Never seen someone complain so much
You'll never get close to me...
... You can look but never touch
Rippin you apart in this battle.. Tearin up everythin you hold dearly
Fuck it ive enjoyed this so much...
... Im gona call out Kaos Theory[/b][/i]
Pretty good
Structure was a bit off due to writing style
Flow was pretty decent, vocab was weak
Punches were decent, personals were ok..
Wordplay was at an attempt, but failed
Rhyme Scheme was weak, pretty basic
Overall... good verse.....14/20
[quote]Wise Ways
But then I got a little wacker when I saw ya talent..& took it
Pissed off..so I socked you in tha head & left ya face crooked!
& by posting ya verse made it official..right on that very day
That every single thing is straight shit if it comes from tha UK
Are you forced to be mentally ill..or do you just do it at will?
I mean peep Free's open mics..& u'll see proof he has no skill!
Ripped by every1 else..why u think he's battling in tha spirit?
If you want tha definition of a herb..shit just look at his lyrics!
I father you kid..& I even donated money to ya charity fund
Make u Hit'Panik..after this u'll change ya name to Yu Bin SunD!
Related to queers?
Because ya punches are gay..& they sorta take after faggots
Free none of ya verses are right & he even types them in Itallics
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Pretty nice too
Good flow, some usage of wordplay
A bit creative in some places... nice
Good punches, hit pretty nicely......
Personals were good.. specially finisher
Structure was good also...kept it clean
Vocabulary wasn't used much, but oh well
Overall... Dope verse.......17/20
V/Wise Ways
Simply came harder
Punches hit harder
Personals stood out
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