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first of all good job to both of you..mostly to diverse....
wordplay-diverse didn't have a whole lot of it, but what there was did make his verse more effective than flashes....flash I saw what you were trying to do..just keep practicin'/
vocab-flash you edged out just above diverse...for most of your verse,,well until the whole ending where you started using words no one has seen before..diverse kept it sort of simple, but atleast kept it consistent and relevant to the battle../
personals-diverse used a lot of flashes own profile to tear him down,....I don't think flash had any in his verse at all.
punches-diverse used a couple played punches, then he used some sub-par punches..he kept it simple with those...flash had the same problem..but he had a worse problem with the amount of filler he used....
flow-flashes verse was flowing pretty good until the thid line..then they all became too long, his structure was a big point loser also, he needs to pick a line length and stick with it...diverse had a good flow and his structure was a little more professional looking...
VOTE--diverse
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