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Old 02-07-04, 05:58 AM   #8
Pariah
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I cant vote officially (not enough posts), but here's my thoughts:

Flow: Dazasta killed him, with great flow. Probable's shit kinnda flowed,
but was hard to read and fell off in many spots.Also what is with the
[ ] at the end of the lines? Structure needs serious work.

Punches: Again Dazasta wrecked shit. Strong, direct punches thru the
entire verse, I LMAO at most of them. Probable's punches
were played and indirect. Just far too weak compared
to Dazasta's.

Personals: Dazasta had good personals about Probable trying out and
the call out thread. Probable tried to flip Dazasta's name
" I casue Dazasta disaster", which only ended up being
the most played/uncreative personal Iv'e ever seen. LOL
Other than that, he had no other personals.

Creatvity: Dazasta was leaps and bounds ahead of Probable in the
creativity department. Had alot of funny punches/personals
that hit hard, While Probable came w/ some weak and
played material. Very uninspired.

Overall: Clearly a merking by Dazasta. He proved to be way too
much for probable to handle. Came w/ strong punches
and personals that were funny and hit hard. Probable was
seriously lacking in both creativity and punches/personals.
He needs to consider experience when deciding to battle
someone. He was simply outmatched and didn't stand a
chance. Like I said before I cant officially vote, but if I
could, it would be for: Dazasta

My favorite line: "but i guess it cool....post your verse?...why begin?...
..................................chuz i could post that many dots..and still manage to win..." LOL!