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OutCome
Alright class heres a simple equation, dev plus rap equals… a-bad-situation
So were does he come off? is his affixation hooked and on wack masterbation?
Hes just mad, 24 and still cant find a job - geta mic and isa part time fag
Cant rap an to bad this cats drops enough wack herb shit, to call his crap schwag
Punching with illusion fist, no real hits so i expose you like janets titty
Your not witty, check your sig d your at wits end, and it'sa real pitty
I knock all hemispheres off the Y-axis so there pointing down
A I cant help but leave you x-up with your frown all fliped around
What the fucks an En-gland, that's not what you use to spit
Im expecting a good battle, maybe he'll be usual, and use his pre writs
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Honestly... the structure was a bit off
The BOLD was gay as fuck......
When you bold some of ya verse....
It makes it look like shit..
Ya punches were decent...
Personals were weak.. flow was decent
Overall..........10/20
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Dev
So ya excepted the battle… but the OutCome is set
Ya might have planted the ‘seed’… but they’re drowned cos ya wet!
And I approach you with ease… ive got no problem with defeat
but your verse tells me… this kid’s always getting beat!
So, don’t matter what you put in… your never gonna reap
You couldn’t elevate with helium… you’ve got a permanent leak!
And NO your not respected… and rb’s eyes aint reading
If ya bars were breathing… it be lung cancer… ya wheezing!
OutCome, come-out…. No difference ya still a fag
In or out the closet… still in the dark… wit skillz you wish you had!
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Better....
Punches hit harder than OutCome's
Personals were decent.... some played
A few of the lines were played.. but it happens
Flow was pretty good...
Structure was better than OutCome's also
Overall........13/20
V/Dev
Came a lil harder
Verse looked better
ect...
ILLunatic v.s wordplay
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