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Old 02-07-04, 08:37 AM   #11
Chris Black
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IP:

you got the type of rhymes..I don't want to read or hear/
in fact...instead of postin' back.... picture me with covered ears/
nah...covered ears?...this is text
actin' all cocky, line no one will vote for mine/
can't you even see...that is was 2:42 when you died?/
I didnt get it...pm me an explination if you think this line will cost you
after I type this verse...I'm gonna freepost/
get disqualified....and still end up snatchin, all your votes/
this one was cool
your a softy...watch you get pulled like taffy/
if you need me to spit newbie-like..all you gotta do is ask me/
nope
crush me? your the one gettin' smashed -g-/
if rhymes were wieght....you would float like anti-gravity/
eeeh, i guess ok

This kids styles disfigured, i figured he was a wack newbie
He's like the Detroit Lions team, completely weak truley
blah
Takin this battle easily, no problems i got it under control
Dude better dig a hole.......
.....like saddam hussein, in order not to get eatin whole
nah
Its a simple defeat, no need to try against this wannabe
He was wantin me...........
.................his homosexual tendencies was hoppin see
not a punch
His status is invisible, thankfully he doesn't seem to appear
Oh look he's queer......
.....His location says "above xceltiz's grave", prolly in tears
lol, nice
Time to finish him, as i deminish him, he pleads in fear
The end is near, time for this kid to get d/r's straight up the rear
Nope....wouldnt dick rider be on his dick?...

I think ill had the best line. I just wasnt feeling much of the rest cause he came with a couple weak punches and some lines didnt have punches. I know he can come nice but it just wasnt there in thid verse. Wordplay didnt have any lines as good as ills one line. i wasn't feeling much of that verse either. This is a hard vote, but i gotta go with ill for at least making me smurk.

Vote: Ill

Please return the favor...I really need votes

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