think both could have come alot harder with the punches... and with less played lines.... but Ill ive seen you do much better battles, but looking at the opponent's verse, id wasnt really needed to pull it all out.... you still take this, you came with more creativity and harder punching with a better feel to your verse,,, less noob'ish...... so you get the vote..... your opening was stronger aswell as the closer, thought it could have been worded better.... all in all vote=Ill