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IP:
iight...
Never read anything from you before...
This was pretty decent actually...
Played topic... Love... But love is always good to write about...
You had some good emotion in this piece... Vocabulary wasnt amazing... But it was quite decent... Flow was on through-out... That was nice... You hade some nice concepts...
Only really need to up your vocabulary... Nothing major...
Keep dropping...
Hit up something in my sig... Thanks...
Pz...
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