This was a cool drop. Easy and enjoyable read. I loved the rhyme scheme at the begining. It seemed to fad as it went along, but the whole piece was nice. Emotions were ok...better in some parts. I don't know why, but i love that last line. This was worth the read. Keep up the good work.
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