Its not often, unless the well known writers drop that you see good use of multis and I think you should be known as one of those writers after just dropping those tight multis, your scheme wasn't too consistant, but the flow was tight throughout, I was feeling your bar length even though it might be a bit stretched over a beat, but It all depends on your tempo, anyway, the content was nice and soppy, not many people like that, but its good to keep your writing versatile, peace out man, oh and i liked the topic.