yo....I masticate every sylable you claim to dictate/
to get you bitchin' to a mod, about how you got raped/
Not a bad opener...5/10
this battle isn't yours, I'll e-mail my face/
with detail and rage, to mean mug and disgrace/
Liked the creativity, nice...7/10
I got a grave dug, and a stone with your name/
engraved, so deep, it's in chinese two years away/
Got a chuckle on this...6/10
you aint on right now, cause your a minor up in class/
I bet you can't log on,unless you talk to mom and ask/
wasnt feelin this one...2/10
permission, I split herbs like fission, makin' blood fizz up/
to twist, fuck, and blurr your vision/
Very nice flow, liked this one...8/10
I'll cut up the judges, and recieve a split decision/
concieve a bitch religion, and make you the beast up in it/
First line was nice, overall good...6/10
beliefs are eased to make-believe, shake your family tree/
mutilate the falling leaves, how long can you hang, from a limb thats deceased?/
Ok closer, not the best, not the worst...5/10

::Score- 39/70::


Fuck This Gay Quere...Look Im Nothing New to This
Cos il... Make My Big Foot Drop N.. STAND UP!.. like Ludacriss
Weak opener in my opinion...4/10
& Who Is This? a Chump Maybe? Or Whatever THis Fool Says..
His Best Rhymes Is Proberly.. Paradice
.................................................. ...^Damn He's The Wack LL Cool J!
umm...??...2/10
Go To School N Play, Hide N Seek ..Cos Dawg im outta Ya League.
-QUICK.. M-E-R-K-I-N-G...Oh Now Go N Breath!
you really need to elevate man...3/10
Hold Your Breath Thou..Cos.. Here It Comes A Super Punchline!
Cos il Get Gats On Your Neck..And then only Tell U... 1 Time
Prolly the best of your lines, and it still was...wack?...5/10

::Score- 14/40::

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p.s. - sorry i cant poll vote, but there's my shitt ^^