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Baz187
Blah Blah Blah Blah, whats ur name?,/
ur giving me narcolepsy,, cos all ur shit sound the same,/
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz, sorry about that,, shit,/
im about to Lenox Lewis ur world,, swing-and-hit,/
now u out cold,, n i aint even through with this ryhme,/
count to ten,, ding,, ding,, now this battle is mine,/
now the doctor rushes to u,, u like help me,, please,/
that nigga 187,, got me down on my knee's,/
now like mike tyson,, im ready to bite,/
games up niggateen,, its over aiight,
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LMFAO
Played verse....
somewhat good structure
Punches was weak......
Personals were .. BLAH...
Flow was ok.....
But damn... need elevation
Overall......9/20
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Niggateen
Baz?...tell me, what the hell does that name mean?...
Beating off to Ass pics out of a Gay 'Zine?...
You see a career in the future? Well, i dont see shit...
The bottom must have fallen out like Janet Jackson's Tit...
Well "dog", this battles over, i already see the red fern...
you're passed your prime, so turn around, i think you missed the turn...
You want to elevate, but it just dont work, like toy helicopters...
You probably bite, to you good battlers are just like teliprompters...
Give it up, this is the brutal end to your little fairy tale...
your finished, go to Ebay and put your computer up for sale...
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[size=1 Decent
Punches were decent
Personals were... some what ok
Structure was better...
Flow was good... some what wordplay
Some little vocabulary
Overall......12/20
V/Niggateen
Came a lil harder[/size]
ILLunatic v.s wordplay
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