This was one of the better pieces i've seen from ed if not thte best, but i haven't read many of penskills if any, but i think your a very good writer, Both of you actually compliment each others style, adn i'm not just saying that, thew structure was nice from both of you, even thought doesn't mean much, but more importantly the flow was dope, i saw some tight as inners from both, the topic got me thinking, just about love really, it was a bit of a played topic, but everyones topics basically boil down to one being done before, but you managed to give this a fresh feel to it

The power she possesed,enormous,but not close to ideal
always trying to obliberate the fact's of her own conceal

^ your opening ed was perfect. worded so dopely, nice multi

Fell for you from my first breath, beauty left this man gasping
Violence is at unspeakable depths, yet I seek your hands grasping

^ Penskills, a very nice rhyme scheme going on then, nice multis

Overall: This Is Dope As Fuck. Props

Edicius is also one of my biggest inspirations.. Let It Be Known.