your guy's stuff compliments each other's work very well. its a well done collab.
ed, your piece opened up the whole thing very well, it was very strong, with a great flow, structure and great vocab. your content was beautiful, well written with good detail.
pen, your piece kept the piece going nicely, matching the flow and structure of ed's nicely. your vocab was strong too. you did a good job ending this, and didnt drag it out.

all in all this piece was beautiful, full of emotion and just wow! lol very nice job guys!

~Tera~
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