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illtalic
Read this fags posts from top to bottom.. start wiv the sig
he's immediately G.O.N.. so much for makin it big...
Look at ur crew for a second.. the recruiters a Dazasta
a load of wack rejects lost in time.. an Banderas was just a starter...
A 1 in ur name makes u top of the class? I'd clown u wiv sheets
now im leavin ur mouth on the floor.. so ur really the Voice of the Streets...
Ur an oddity.. not a genius.. but still a freak of nature
your life is as good as over.. the minute my pen meets the paper...
With 10-14 lines i'll take the minimum required.. an still leave u tired
skills are fired.. u shoulda followed ur instinct an gracefully retired.../

Eh...
ok verse.. punches could use work
Personals were decent.. didn't hit hard
Wordplay was eh... flow was pretty good
Structure was good....
some played lines tho
Overall.......12/20

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W1CKED
Cant recognize illness, so u even come wack when your biting
And the only real comedy, is the fucking fact that your writing*
This ain’t a battle; it’s slaughter, cause this fuck lacks wisdom
I’ll bless him, and dump his corps in the water...like a baptism!
My raps split him, so I only have a prayer to offer his ken-folk
Before we battled,
I should have got on his level......by jumping out of my window!
Nigga, I use my spits as a gun and I’ll kill him with this weapon
I Upper-handed him some ill lines....But this bitch aint catching!...**
Not starting your car, or Taking a shit....Nigga, Nothing’s safe!
He though he’d win, but reality hit.....& broke his fucking face!
I’ve made a living bussing 8s, & I’m just learning to use this art
A win is nothing...
So I’ve decided to up the stakes...& drive’em through his heart !

Eh.....
A few played lines..
Punches were decently hitting
Personals were.. blah..
Flow was good
structure was good...
Wordplay was.... eh.. dont kn what to say.
Overall............13/20

V/W1CKED
he edged this one barely
His punches hit a bit harder