Presently Light...Waits
From: Hayes, VA aka Haze-where its hard ta see |
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good battle.......verses could have been longer.....mentill......why did you key?......tha breakdown:
Big E.Z. rhyme scheme- 7, story- 8, flow- 7, total- 22
nyce drop............really felt tha emotion (extremely deep), flow was ok...........could have been longer to show better imagery
Mentill- rhyme scheme- 7.5, story-7, flow-7.5, total-21.5
this was a close battle, why didnt you take more time mentill...............you could've ripped it, i really lyked tha first half of your verse..........but afta that it just fell off, you could have elaborated and made it longer
my vote goes to Big E.Z...........no hard feelins, may tha best man win, peace, 1
ohh yeah, go vote on my battle
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