Damn homie...that was a nice flow..it flowed well n evrything fell into place...u anotha newbie that got skill n potentialm wit jus a lil help u can bacome one o de best in RB..there was no flaw except that u need to lose the// on the end of evry bar cuz thats oldskool n when u start flowin to longa pieces n usin harder vocab u wont be needin the // on evry end o de bar...basically u got skill n i hope to see more in tha future

Peace

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