lol. an ok peice i guess. considering it was freestyle. it had a choppy
flow but at least the rhymes were there the vocab and word choice was
decent. ur rite it didn't make sense but it makes for an ok read. just add
in sum structure and maybe it can be considered a masterpiece. keep at it.
elevate

hit this up plz:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112457

pz

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