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lol.....
Daz killed this kid, didnt like it first read thru but it did infact flow nicely..
Both need to adapt to a real short structure, probable need to work on punches and flo....you lacked both, Overall Daz took shit pretty easy, as in flo personals and funny punches.....the flo was key tho...nice
vote dazasta
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BUT especially this..
I cant vote officially (not enough posts), but here's my thoughts:
Flow: Dazasta killed him, with great flow. Probable's shit kinnda flowed,
but was hard to read and fell off in many spots.Also what is with the
[ ] at the end of the lines? Structure needs serious work.
Punches: Again Dazasta wrecked shit. Strong, direct punches thru the
entire verse, I LMAO at most of them. Probable's punches
were played and indirect. Just far too weak compared
to Dazasta's.
Personals: Dazasta had good personals about Probable trying out and
the call out thread. Probable tried to flip Dazasta's name
" I casue Dazasta disaster", which only ended up being
the most played/uncreative personal Iv'e ever seen. LOL
Other than that, he had no other personals.
Creatvity: Dazasta was leaps and bounds ahead of Probable in the
creativity department. Had alot of funny punches/personals
that hit hard, While Probable came w/ some weak and
played material. Very uninspired.
Overall: Clearly a merking by Dazasta. He proved to be way too
much for probable to handle. Came w/ strong punches
and personals that were funny and hit hard. Probable was
seriously lacking in both creativity and punches/personals.
He needs to consider experience when deciding to battle
someone. He was simply outmatched and didn't stand a
chance. Like I said before I cant officially vote, but if I
could, it would be for: Dazasta
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Dazasta was just better, as he is..always.
Because he only battles herbs.
Better punches..& overall verse, thats it
vote Daz