dont feel sad!!! this is a gud poem, i think that the imagey is right along the lones of wat krem sed, it gives off a vibe of war.........i think this is a gud peice tho cuz war is sucha big part of lyf rite now....

....................fav part....................

to the heavens motives inane
as contenents crumble for fallen names
while roots of memory grow insane
why do you chose to stay and remain?


keep droppin.......

my utha peices

sweet caress
rewind time
so many

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