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Old 02-07-04, 03:58 PM   #10
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Mindtrap
End this shit right quick, make sure BL cries
So watch me split this bitch
...down the middle and take sides
You're wack duke, and whats hurts the most
Is that the Flu could beat ya sickly ass
....with a freepost (Flu is C-Section you dumb fucks)
So I'll blaze kid leave him fired up for this match
And only when talkin of tossing salad
...is this faggot fuck ever a great catch
I'm nice...
belivee that... So I let cat post a verse before mine
So I could pull an RTM and leave the wackness behind
Leave Big L fucked like reality, in a dumpster a total wreck
And yeah I'm a step behind... your ears
...while destroying this faggots neck


Eh...
Needs work...
12/20



Quote:
Black Lizzard
Like little fat assed kids you're just always come out last
U a faggot ass bitch made sore loser known from bitch moves
Dont even try that'dog,we know eich other from the past O.o
Ill leave him,behind so he can straighten the learning curve
All u'r rhymes formless and uneducated..
Shit u always remain,sketchy wit scribbled lines
So infant they need 2 be incubated..
This bitch compared to ill, in a room w/ Spasm's!
U'r Fake-Ass Cant Match-Me Cuz
I Cut Your-Fukkin-Climax Like Decapitating-Orgasms..


Eh..
A little better
...needs work tho
14/20


Both verses were rather weak
and could use some elevation
Punches made it look like a cat fight
Simply wasn't a great battle....
But lizzard somewhat edged mindtrap on this
His vocabulary was just a lil better
and punches tapped a lil harder...
therefore....

V/Black Lizzard
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