decent peice.......well writtin...... 2 different topic were touched on....but the transition ... (scarred kids ...blahblah) was good.....seemed real enough....truth behind this.....consistency and intrigue is good here.....nice work keep at it.......peep this piece i jusy key'd not tooo long
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...507#post1164507

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