Nice, I See You Switched Your Style, Using Shorter Lines N All And It Worked Well. Very Good Imagery, And Typical Fgee Usage Of Good Vocab! Not Really Much To Criticise...Flow Was Good, Consistancy Was Key Here, And Topic Chosen, And The Way You Approached It Was Great.

Great Drop.

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