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Old 02-07-04, 05:20 PM   #25
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Punches: Village, Proof had no real punches, so Village takes this one wiyjout doubt
Wordplay: Neither, no worpdlay in both verse, get some in there
Multis: Proof, had a few 3 syllable rhymes, villages just barely rhymed even if it did
Personals: Village, had lines talking about he was a newb, Proof was trying to defend himslef in his verse
Opener: Village, proof had nothing but flow in his opener
Closer: Village, same as well, nothing but filler from Proof

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Proof you need to work on basic punches, a comparison between 2 things, think some up, and try again next time. All I can really say. Village, your ryhmes were barely there, make sure everything flows nicely.
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