i can tell this guy wants to be 'slim shady' but i leave him hurt like pain/[yea]
and i'ma kill this 'Eminem' like i beat Michael Meyers at his own game/[damn]
nope
i cause dazasta disaster when i spit faster than twista rappen/[uh]
is that you or your sista rappen? cuz it soundz female and thats how this 'bitch' is actin/[fuckin faggot]
this is text, so did you hear his voice befor?...if not this was wack...even if you did this should be worded better
yo i'ma giant like andre and i'ma doctor like dre/[what!]
my wordz leave you cut up like i inhaled and spit out my body spray/..axe
ok, nice attempt...this line had alot of potencial
you said you was ill and your weak ass lied/[yea ya did]
now there's only one way out........suicide/..his sig
ha, decent personal...
this is my first battle on this site but i'm rising like tha sun/[yea]
and when you lose peepz we'll sayin my spitz were surprisin when its done/
[mmhhhmmm]
nope
tha truth is this bitch is like a tampon bloodier than shit/
and i just lefte him in tha ditch covered in mah shit/[i shit on rappers]
nope
You had some decent attempts. The suicide line was cool, but you need word on wording. Also take the "/"s and "[]"s out of your verse. It fucks it up
question my guilt...i feel partially responsible..
for letting him get dreams of beating me...high-ly unprobable..
nope
yes i guess its possible...for you to get some luck...
..your ratings unforgettable man...they unforgettably suck..
should have been worded better...good concept
remember these nutz?..yes those words came out of my mouth...
and when he asked to battle me...i made him drop a tryout*...
haha, nice personal
how did you find out?...ill just follow the rules..
yet you broke them anyway..chuz my callout specifically asked for NO NEWBS...
lol, another nice personal
but i guess it cool....post your verse?...why begin?...
..................................chuz i could post that many dots..and still manage to win...
ha
we all need a friend....ill supply you with plenty hits..
and on a scale of 1-10...i'd have to call you....an Idiot...
lmao....best punch i seen in a minute
i get rid of herbish shit...to feel good shit inside...
and if you want a chance to win...do this ..and hit quick reply...
blah
dazasta clearly got this with better punches and personals. Seems like he just felt like picking on a newb
lol
v/D