listenin.. that bassline is annoyin... this need so much improvement.. flow was way off.. was ur mom in the room?? n u were scared to rap louder n with more emotion... cause u need that a lot.. whats up with the pause between verses.. lyrics needs to get better... delivery was offffffffffff.... u stop at the end... n started breathin into the mic...lol.. dont do that acapella shit...

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