zikio's verse
when u come face to face wit my colt its gon do more than chip
the damage is something that cant be conprehended
Weak weak weak opener, didnt even rhyme
Im like a navy seal Im just searching
when I see a whack ass rapper there I am and Im lurking
So your lurking where theres wack rappers... wack
coming against me is ur ultimate mistake
its a an error for which u shall pay
Filler, hardly rhymed
u say that 4-0 record
well prepare to get a 1 on the loss and a ride on the strecher
Sad attempt at a punch
this battle may be good and it may lead too much perstiance
but the only thing this oak ridge rapper is gon' do is wipe ur existance
this was the best line in the verse, ok atempt at a punch, but still wacky
Timeless Verse
You call that shit a verse? and prewritten With a week to rehearse?
Ya need ta speak to a nurse. Cause blood about ta leak through ya shirt
Ok opener, second line was filler
I spontaneously come-bussin caps, wit Russian gats, that's crushing cats.
There MIGHT b a verse that can out-class me, but I guarantee, it wasn't that
Nice wordplay, and a nice personal as well
you should lose on even ONE vote. Cause when I drop these ill rhymin lines
I guarantee~ya~see~a~loss, but judgin from ya spit, it will NOT be mine
Ok punch, not that hard hittin but ok
rhymes that i spit are alot hotter than fire, and deeper than 6 oceans
it would b best if i kill ya in this battle, coz dead rappers get better promotion
Very nice, first line had good metaphor, and was followed witta hard punch
this is a fairy tale for ya,hey cindarella its been good to know ya
so remember this little bitch just after 12 o'clock this battle woz over.
Alright closer, not the best but you already beat him anyways.
Zikio you had no real punches, and some of your shit didnt rhyme... You need to elevate alot before battlin someone like timeless again.
Timeless you hadda decent verse, hard hittin punches wit some personals and some nice wordplay, could still use elevatin, but hey, who couldnt. Good battle man.
Vote - Timeless
Sorry I cant poll.
If you could hit me up wit an honest vote Id appreciate it. Thanks.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112309
Pz.