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Old 02-07-04, 08:21 PM   #9
Brethren
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Punches: Tox, better punches, Optimus's punches were poorly aimed
Wordplay: Tox, had the pop/bubbles line, none exceptable from Opt
Multis: Optimus, basically whole verse was multis
Personals: Tox had the Optimus Prime line, no personals from Opt
Opener: Tox had a decent punch as opener, Opt's was just a load of multis
Closer: Tox, ended verse with a personal, again a horrible attempt for a punch from Opt

Vote - Intoxicated

He'll Never = Me... (think about it)no sequal~g tell u wat ill ko ur ass this time an in a months time u can recall~me
Best from Optimus

The thing is... i'm smokin YOU, yet im bad for your health/
your verse was funny... but the only person who laughed was yourself
Best bar from Intoxicated

Overall slow the multis down Optimus, just make a creative punch, that's all you need. Decent punches from Intoxicated, decent flow, just keep doing what you're doing.
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